I'm a bit discouraged. I must admit I only gave them away to read because my boyfriend suggested it and I was actually not going to. It was only when he brought it up with friends who were over, as he was bragging about my accomplishment. At the time I was annoyed with him. I wanted to keep this just between the two of us, I will admit I am using my mother's maiden name, and I was a shade embarrassed by having people I knew reading what I have written. When I got with my friends before I was just getting their take on erotica and what they found sexy. I shared the general outline of what I was working on and got their take and feedback on what they would want to read. I had no plans to actually let them read it. Exactly what I was worried about happened, one of my boyfriend's friends texted him with his own girlfriend's comment of 'Fiona is a freak in the bedroom, or she has a really great imagination.' Not what I was looking forward to having my friends think about me.
Regardless, I guess I am just disappointed in my lack of ability to do it perfectly on my own. I was already looking forward them on Amazon and now I have to take a step back and go back to fixing before I get to that part.
Work continues.
